Olympic Matches Games.

I'm very exited with about the Olympic Matches Games, specially in Basketball and Women Hockey. Here we (in Argentina) have good teams, as per my knowledge as far as I know. Maybe they're not the best but they're very good.
I'm happy both of them won yesterday. I hope they continue winning and they could reach achieve at least one medal.

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Well done! Your writing is very clear and interesting. I think you must be using Argentinian punctuation, because it is very curious. Also the phrase "as per" is very casual and needs to be used with care. Apart from that - brilliant!

Keep writing.

Olympic Matches

I'm very excited with about the Olympic Matches, especially in Basketball and Women's Hockey; where we (Argentina) have good teams, as per to the best of my knowledge, maybe they're not the best but they're certainly very good.
I'm happy both of them won yesterday. I hope they continue winning and that they could reach win at least one medal between them.

Good.