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취미들~~~~ 일반적으로 저는 대학교를 가요. 전 학교에 가지 않으면, 집에 남아고 있어요. 가짱 좋아하는 취미들은 읽고 이야기들 쓰고, 음악을 짓기/듣기 하고 배우기 새로운 것들 있어요.  내 컴퓨터에 대부분의 취미들을 해요. 하지만 가끔 제가 조금만 더 나갈 수 있으면 소원해요. 전 자연을 그리고 사람들이 만나도를 좋아요.  컴퓨터들을 공부하니까, 펜으로고 종으로 드물게 써요. ------------------------------------------------------------- (I normally go to school (university). When I don't go to school, I stay at home. My favorite hobbies are reading, writing stories, composing/listening to music and learning new things. I do most of my hobbies on my computer. But sometimes I wish I could go out more. I love nature and seeing other people. Since I am studying computers, I rarely write with pen and paper anymore. I type and draw everything on my computer now.)

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취미들~~~~

보통 저는 학교에 가요. 학교에 가지 않으면, 집에 그냥 있어요. 가장 좋아하는 취미들은 책 읽기, 이야기 쓰기, 음악 작곡과 감상, 그리고 새로운 것들을 배우는 것이에요.  저는 대부분의 취미들을 컴퓨터로 해요. 하지만 가끔 제가 조금만 더 나갈 수 있기를 바래요. 전 자연을, 그리고 사람들을 만나기를 좋아해요. 

컴퓨터로 공부하니까, 펜과 종이로 드물게 써요.

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(I normally go to school (university). When I don't go to school, I stay at home. My favorite hobbies are reading, writing stories, composing/listening to music and learning new things. I do most of my hobbies on my computer. But sometimes I wish I could go out more. I love nature and seeing other people.

Since I am studying computers, I rarely write with pen and paper anymore. I type and draw everything on my computer now.)

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취미들~~~~

일반적으로 저는 대학교를에 가요. 전 학교에 가지 않으면, 집에 남아고 있어요. 가짱장 좋아하는 취미들은 읽고 이야기들 쓰고, 음악을 짓기작곡/듣기(or감상) 하고 배우기 새로운 것들 새로운 것을 배우는 것이 있어요.  내 컴퓨터에로 대부분의 취미들을 해요. 하지만 가끔 제가 조금만 더 밖으로 나갈 수 있으면기를 소원해요바라요. 전 자연을 그리고 사람들이 만나도를는 것을 좋아해요. 

컴퓨터들을 공부하니까, 펜으로고과 종이으로 드물게 써요.

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(I normally go to school (university). When I don't go to school, I stay at home. My favorite hobbies are reading, writing stories, composing/listening to music and learning new things. I do most of my hobbies on my computer. But sometimes I wish I could go out more. I love nature and seeing other people.

Since I am studying computers, I rarely write with pen and paper anymore. I type and draw everything on my computer now.)

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대학교에 다녀요(가요).가장 좋아하는 취미들은 책 읽고 이야기 쓰고.......새로운 것들 배우기.... 전 자연하고/과 사람들이 만나도 좋아요 화이팅~

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