Hello, everyone. My name is Carol. I am from Taiwan. (me too :D) I really want to improve my English(ability). I think listening, reading and speaking are good ways for me to practice English. But the result is not as good as what I expected. Maybe I've been using the wrong way learning English.

I'm not only interested in watching football games and F1, but also enjoy watching different kinds of TV shows and listening to English music. These hobbies can help me relax so that I can learn English easily without any stress. I really hope these methods can improve my English.

"Why do I want to improve my English?" First of all, English is very important in our country. Secondly, I love western countries.(culture maybe :D) Thirdly, learning English can help me gain more confidence. 

To sum up, I hope I can get some valuable experiences and English learning skills from this good website. (me too! 一起加油!)

I rewrite your essay but I'm not 100% sure it's correct coz I'm not English native speakers. :D

Introducing mMyself

Hello,everyone.My name is Carol.I am from Taiwan.I want to hugely improve my English ability in English hugely, so listening, reading, and speaking continuously. But I still can't feel the effect obviously.Maybe I have wrong ways to learn English.
I am interested in watching football games and F1, also enjoying watching many kinds of TV shows and listening English. These hobbies can make me relax and learn English. I really hope these ways can improve my English.
Why do I want to my English ability is fluent? First, English is too important on our circumstances. Secondly, I love the cultures about western countries. Thirdly, when I good at English, I can have more confidencet.
eventually, I Hope to get some treasure experiences and English skills from the good website.

*Some other errors, but that is okay.  We will learn together.  You teach me Mandarin and I will teach you English.  Deal?