A trip I plan to take

My name is Zhu Fangyuan. My English name is Julia. I‘m Chinese and grew up in Wuhan where the famous Yellow Crane Tower is located in. I am learning Engilsh because of the IELTS exam. I have a strong desire for to studying abroad to continue my study of design.
I really want to take a trip around Europe after my undergraduate, probably travelling by flight. Going all around Europe has always been one of my dreams. My first stop would be England and then Eastern Europe after that, and then maybe Italy also. I plan to do it this way because I want to see the rich history and culture of the continent.While I am young, I feel it would be a good time to embark on a long trip to experience some foreign cultures.

Nice piece; few little errors. Make sure you sneak in a trip to Ireland as well!

A trip I plan to take

My name is Zhu Fangyuan.My English name is Julia.I‘m Chinese and grew up in Wuhan where the famous Yellow Crane Tower located in. I am learning Engilsh because of the exam IELTS.I have a strong desire for studying abroad to continue my study of design.
I really want to take a trip around Europe after my undergraduate,probably travelling by flight.Going all around Europe has always been one of my dreams.My first stop would be England and Eastern Europe after that,and then may be Italy.I plan to do it this way because I want to see the rich history and culture of the continent.While I am young,I feel it would be a good time to embark on a long trip to experience some foreign culture.