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Newbie! HI ! I'm learning english because I like the idiom and I work in a worlwide company so I need to use english in my work. Also beacuse I like to travel and english is the language that is used in all the world. My native language is spanish, and I grew up in Argentina, Buenos Aires, where I live currently. I enjoy watching movies, taking photographs, doing pottery, spending time with my friends and family and also surf the internet.

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Newbie!

HI! I'm learning English because I like the idiom language (idioma in Spanish think of lengua to help you remember) and I work in a worlwide company so I need to use English in my work. Also because I like to travel and English is the language that is used in all over the world.
My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Buenos Aires, Argentina where I live currently.
I enjoy watching movies, taking photographs, doing pottery, spending time with my friends and family and also surfing the internet.

 

¡Muy Bien! Inglés sera pan comido para tí! Your only big error was not giving the name of a language a capital letter (languages are proper nouns e.g. there is only one Spanish language so it gets a capital) Also in English (not sure about Spanish) we say the name of town/city before country e.g. Córdoba, Argentina but not Argentina, Córdoba.

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Newbie!

HI ! I'm learning english because I like the idiom and I work in a worlwide company so I need to use english in my work. Also beacuse moreover,I like to travel and English is the language that is used in all over the world.
My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Argentina, Buenos Aires, where I live currently.
I enjoy watching movies, taking photographs, doing pottery, spending time with my friends and family and also surfing the internet.

 

good job.keep up the great work

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Newbie!

HI ! I'm learning English because I like the language and I work in a worlwide company so I need to use English for my work. Also beacuse I like to travel and English is the language that is used in all the world.
My native language is Spanish, and I grew up in Argentina, Buenos Aires, where I live currently.
I enjoy watching movies, taking photographs, doing pottery, spending time with my friends and family and also surf the internet.

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I forgot in my correction "worldwide" not worlwide.

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