the day is so hot
We all know,Beijing had rained so heavily.But in here,the day is so hot.It's doesn't rain.I like rain.That feel is so wonderful.But it doesn't as my wishes.In this hot day,I want to swim,but my mum doesn't let me go alone.She says that too dangerous.I can't agree with she.
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the day is so hot
We all know,Beijing had rained so heavily.But in here,the day is so hot.It's doesn't rain.I like rain.That feel is so wonderful.But it doesn't as my wishes.In this hot day,I want to swim,but my mum doesn't let me go alone.She says that too dangerous.I can't agree with she.
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The day is so hot
As we all know, it rained heavily in Beijing. But here, the day is so hot. It doesn't rain. I like rain. Rain feels so wonderful. But my wish just doesn't come true. On this hot day, I want to swim, but my mom doesn't let me go alone. She says it's too dangerous. I can't agree with her.
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