你好. First Chinese notebook entry, please give corrections!
Nĭ hǎo. Yǒu shén me xī qí de? Wǒ jiaò Unicorn. Wǒ 22 suì le. Hĕn gǎoxing rènshi nĭ. Zàijiàn.
你好。有什么希奇的? 我叫 Unicorn。我 22 岁了。很高兴认识你。 再见。
(Hello. What's new? I am Unicorn. I'm 22 years old. Nice to meet you. Bye.
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你好. First Chinese notebook entry, please give corrections!
Nĭ hǎo. Yǒu shén me xī qí de? Wǒ jiaò Unicorn. Wǒ 22 suì le. Hĕn gǎoxing rènshi nĭ. Zàijiàn.
你好。有什么希奇的?（最近这么样how are you doing or how are you） 我叫 Unicorn。我 22 岁了。很高兴认识你。 再见。
(Hello. What's new?(this sentence have several means,i don't know what's your mean.) I am Unicorn. I'm 22 years old. Nice to meet you. Bye.
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你好. First Chinese notebook entry, please give corrections!
Nĭ hǎo. Yǒu shén me xī qí de? Wǒ jiaò Unicorn. Wǒ 22 suì le. Hĕn gǎoxing rènshi nĭ. Zàijiàn.
你好! 我叫 Unicorn。我 22 岁了。很高兴认识你。 再见。("有什么希奇的?"放在这句话里不妥当，应该删去。 )
(Hello. What's new? I am Unicorn. I'm 22 years old. Nice to meet you. Bye.
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Why isn't 有什么希奇的 said after 你好?
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nice to meet you too~but we don't say 有什么希奇的 after你好,any way~很高兴认识你~
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你好. First Chinese notebook entry, please give corrections!
Nĭ hǎo. Yǒu shén me xī qí de? Wǒ jiaò Unicorn. Wǒ 22 suì le. Hĕn gǎoxing rènshi nĭ. Zàijiàn.
你好。有什么希奇的? 我叫 Unicorn。我 22 岁了。很高兴认识你。 再见。
(Hello. What's new? I am Unicorn. I'm 22 years old. Nice to meet you. Bye.
下面是修改过的:
大家好。最新消息(What's new)我叫 独角兽。我 22 岁了。很高兴认识你们。 谢谢。
Chinese people's habits,You just know other people can notEnd of the article to say "bye."It should be said "thank you".
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