First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to study and make friends from America.
My native language is French.  I grew up in France.
I love playing the piano and I really love ballet, music, and American life.

Note: The word fancy is fine, but most Americans would not use it.  Also, in English, we always capitalize nouns (ie. person, place, or thing), but not pronouns.

For example:

Camden City Police Headquarters is on St. Jacques Street.

The police headquarters is on St. Jacques Street.

The language is pretty.

French is pretty.

Dr. Smith is here.

The doctor is here.

I hope that helps.  You are doing very good.  Any English speaker would understand you.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English, because I want to study in the US and make many friends there.
My native language is french, I grew up in France.
I love playing the piano, ballet dancing, music and the american way of life