My husband ^^;;
My husband is a office worker. He comes straigt home after work.
He is pretty open to other people and daughters but he tends to be conservative about his wife,me.
He likes to play only with me, to eat something with me, to watch TV with me and to do anything with me. He doesn't like to be alone.
Of course, I am grateful for his attention and love to me.
But occasionally, it seems like I am as will-less as a his puppet.
I don't appreciate being treated like that.
He is a sentimental and loving man.
It seems like the older he grows, the younger he looks.
He suddenly cries in watching movies or TV, and he becomes sulky over nothing.
My husband is an object of study forever.
- We have been married for 15 years
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My husband ^^;;
My husband is an office worker. He comes straight home after work.
He is pretty open to other people and our daughters but he tends to be conservative about his wife,me.
He likes to play only with me, to eat something with me, to watch TV with me and to do anything with me. He doesn't like to be alone.
Of course, I am grateful for his attention and love to me,.
but occasionally, it seems like I am as will-less as a his puppet.
I don't appreciate being treated like that.
He is a sentimental and loving man.
It seems like the older he grows, the younger he looks.
He suddenly cries in watching movies or TV, and he becomes sulky over nothing.
My husband is an object of study forever.
- We have been married for 15 years
Not any significant changes. It's not proper writing to start a sentence with a conjunction but either way the meaning is the same.
Your husband sounds sweet but maybe a little possessive. How old are the two of you (if you don't mind my asking)?
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Ok. So, the third sentence in the first paragraph could use a semicolon instead of a comma before "me", but hardly anyone uses semicolons and comma usage is arguable.
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