thank you your corrections!
Everyday I go over your corrections, I learn it.

感谢你们更正我的错误。
每天我复习这些，我学好。

今天也写日记:)

大家好！
今天我住在的地方下雨。
现在还在下雨。
通常我骑车去车站，却因为今天下雨，
所以我母亲把我送到了车站。

每星期三我去学习钢琴。
今天也我也去了那儿。
然后从下午六点到九点我打工。
你们知道Gasto吗？
Gasto是一种家日本的餐馆。我在那里做菜:)
我不喜欢在那里打工，所以每次我打好工以后，觉得很累。

今天写好了！

Hello!
It rains today in my town.
It has rained now.
I usually go to station where it is the nearest from my house by bicycle,
but it rains today, my mother drive me there.

Every Wednesday I have a lesson to learn the piano.
I also went to there today.
After the class, I had a part-time job from 18 to 21.
Do you know Gasto?
Gasto is a kind of family restaurant and I cook there.
However, I don't like work there, so after working I always feel tired.

I finish writing today's diary!

今天也写日记:)

大家好！
今天我住在的地方下雨了。
现在还在下着雨。
通常我骑车去车站，却因为今天下雨，
所以我母亲把我送到了车站。

每个星期三我都要去学习钢琴。
今天也我也去了那儿。
然后从下午六点到九点我去打工。
你们知道Gasto吗？
Gasto是一种家日本的餐馆。我在那里做菜:)
我不喜欢在那里打工，所以每次我打工作好以后，都会觉得很累。

今天的小作文写好了！

今天也写日记:)

大家好！
今天我住在的地方下雨。
现在还在下雨。
通常我骑车去车站，却可是今天下雨，
所以我母亲把我送到了车站。

我每个星期三要去学习钢琴。
今天也我也去了那儿。
然后从下午六点开始我要打工一直到九点。
你们知道Gasto吗？
Gasto是一种一个日本的餐馆。我在那里做菜:)
我不喜欢在那里打工，所以因为我每次打好工以后，都觉得很累。

今天写好了！

Hello!
It rains  in my town today.
It is rained now.
I usually go to the nearest station where it is the  from my house by bicycle,
but it rains today, so my mother drive me there.

I have a piano class every Wednesday  .
I also went to there today.
After the class, I had a part-time job from 18 to 21.
Do you know Gasto?
Gasto is a kind of family restaurant and I cook there.
However, I don't like working there, becaiuse I always feel tired after working .

I've finished writing today's diary!

今天也写日记:)

大家好！
今天我住在的地方下雨。——the better expression is 今天我住的地方在下雨
现在还下雨。
通常我骑车去车站，却今天下雨，—— 但今天下雨
所以我母亲把我送到了车站。

每星期三我去学习钢琴。
今天也我去了那儿。
然后从下午六点到九点我打工。 
你们知道Gasto吗？
Gasto是一种日本的餐馆。我在那里做菜:)——maybe the better way is Gasto 是日本的一种餐馆 
我不喜欢在那里打工，所以每次我打好以后，觉得很累。——所以每次我工作完以后——“打好” sounds a little strange, don't you think so? :) 

今天写好了！

Hello!
It rains today in my town.
It has rained now.
I usually go to station where it is the nearest from my house by bicycle,
but it rains today, my mother drive me there.

Every Wednesday I have a lesson to learn the piano.
I also went to there today.
After the class, I had a part-time job from 18 to 21.
Do you know Gasto?
Gasto is a kind of family restaurant and I cook there.
However, I don't like work there, so after working I always feel tired.

I finish writing today's diary!