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Hello guys! I was wondering if someone who speaks ingles can help me.. I need to write a small composition, so If you can correct this.. it would be awesome! thank you so much!
Advantages and disadvantages of being Famous.
Some people, see their favourite singer, or actors on the TV, and think "I wish i were like him/her !"
These people, only think in the cool things of being famous, but If you think more, you can notice that maybe, there are more disadvantages than the advantages of this.
Let's start with the disvantages. There a lot of them, for instance, go to bored events and miss the importants like birthdays etc The main disadvantage is that everybody knows you, and It's not cool when you don't have peace once in awhile everytime you go out. for example If you go for shopping, your fans will follow you and ask you for pictures, and other stuff. another disadvantages are the pressure that you have of being perfect all the time, and olso the fact that every aspect of your private life is expose.
Okay so this is the first part, thanks for reading!
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Advantages and disadvantages of being Famous.
Some people, see their favourite singers, or actors on the TV, and think "I wish I was like him/her !"
These people, only think in about the cool things related to of being famous, but if you think about it more, you'll can notice that maybe, there are more disadvantages than the advantages of to this being famous.
Let's start with the disvantages. There a lot of them, for instance, going to boring events and missing out on the importants stuff like birthdays etc. The main disadvantage is that everybody knows you, and It's not cool when you don't have get to go out once in the while in peace. For example If you go for shopping, your fans will follow you and ask you for pictures, and other stuff. Another one of the disadvantages are is the pressure that you have of being perfect all the time, and also the fact that every aspect of your private life is exposed.
Okay so this is the first part, thanks for reading!
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Advantages and disadvantages of being famous.
Some people see their favourite singers or actors on the TV and think, "I wish I were like him or her!"
These people only think in about the cool things of being famous; but if you think about it more, you can notice that maybe there are more disadvantages than the advantages of in this.
Let's start with the disadvantages. There a lot of them; for instance, having to go to boring events and miss the important things like birthdays and quality time with family. The main disadvantage is that everybody knows you, and it's not cool when you don't have some peace once in awhile everytime you go out. For example, if you go for shopping, your fans will follow you and ask you for pictures and other stuff. Another one of the disadvantages are is the pressure that you have of being perfect all the time, and also the fact that every aspect of your private life is exposed.
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