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Swimming...
I dont like swimming as a sport. I prefer doing team sports to swimming. In my opinion , swimming is excellent hobby or activity for entertaining with friends but if you want to swim as a sport it will be very bored. Because your just acting is swimming . So almost everyone wants to swim as a professional swimmer but maybe ten per cent can be good swimmer because of being hard and boring...But as for team sports you are with your friends and perpetually are acting together and it seems more enjoyable than individual sports...
i was swimmer when i was fourteen and i gave up for this reasons...
I don't like swiimming as a sport. I prefer team sports than swimming. In my opinion,(or you can say For me,) swimming is an excellent hobby or an entertaining activity to spend with friends. I find swimming as a boring sport because all you do is swim. I think, only ten percent of those who want to become a professional swimmer succeed since swimming is a biT boring. (if you want to state a fact like percentages make sure that you can prove them. If not and if it just your opinion, be sure you put words like for me, i believe, i think and the like.) On the other hand, if you do team sports, you will be with friends and you'll be perpetually doing the activity together, this makes it more enjoyable than individual sports. İ was a swimmer when İ was fourteen and İ gave up for this reason. (you only say reason because you stated only one and that is because you found swimming as a boring sport.)
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