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Summery Of The Egyptian Revolution 2 After Mubarak deposition from president position we made a lot of marches against our "SCAF" then the trials were started for the previous dictator , his sons and a lot of his assistant who were helping him in his crimes specially " The Revolutionist Killing Crime " and through the trial in this issue ; he will imprison for 25 years and then the Egyptian people started to choose the new president for our country so there were a lot of candidates entered this elections such as " Abo_Elftoh , Elsbahe , Elawa , Morsy ........ etc " and the results of the first round in this elections were " the first one was Morsy who represent the Muslim Brotherhood and the second one was the person who represent the remnants of the last regime so both of them entered the second round of this elections , in this round a lot of Egyptian people were dispersed so there were a lot of us didn't go to vote to anyone of those candidates because a lot of us don't like to back again to the last regime by choose the person who represent them , don't like also to choose the Muslim brotherhood because they think that Muslim brotherhood are conservatives and don't flexible like liberal people , also a lot of us damaged their votes , some chose Morsy to don't back to the last regime and the others chose the second candidate who represent the last regime anyway in the end of this elections "Thanks to God " we have now a new president and I think that it don't matter we are happy or sad of this results which succeeded in it the candidate who represent Muslim brotherhood , we should only now be optimistic of our future and work hard to progress our country economic and all field in Egypt .

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Summary Of The Egyptian Revolution 2

After Mubarak's deposition from the presidential position we made a lot of marched several times against our SCAF. then The trials were started then began for the previous dictator, his sons and a lot of his assistants who were helping him in his crimes especially; The Revolutionist Killing Crime. and through the trial in this issue   As a result of the judges verdict he will be imprisoned for 25 years. and then After the trial, the Egyptian people started to choose the new president for our country. so There were a lot of candidates who entered this the elections such as; Abo_Elftoh Fotouh, Elsbahe , Elawa , Morsy, etc...  and The results of the first round in this the elections were; the first one elected was Morsy who represents the Muslim Brotherhood and the second one was the person who represents the remnants of the last regime so both of them entered the second round of this the elections.  In this round a lot of Egyptian people were dispersed so there were a lot of us didn't go get to vote to for any one of those candidates because a lot of us don't wouldn't like to back again return to the last regime by choosing the person people who represent them. Some don't like also to choose the Muslim Brotherhood because they think that the Muslim Brotherhood are Conservatives and don't aren't flexible like Liberal people. Also a lot many of us damaged their our votes because some chose Morsy to don't back to the last regime and the others chose the second candidate who represents the last regime. Anyway in at the end of the elections 'Thanks to God' we have now now have a new president and I think that it don't doesn't matter if we are happy or sad of about this the results in which the candidate representing the Muslim Brotherhood succeeded in it the candidate who represent Muslim brotherhood because we should only now be optimistic of about our futures and work hard to progress our country economically and in all other field sectors in Egypt.


Interesting to see an Egyptian person talking about the problems there. It was quite good generally but difficult to correct because some of the sentences were too long. Try and use more full stops.  

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its very good.....

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