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The house of my dreams (thank's for you next correction's!) Today I've studied some new English words about architecture and buildings and want to use them in my assey "the house of my dreams" I wonder that the house of my dream will be the two-storeys. I'd like to have a lot of rooms because I have a big family. There'll be a big kitchen with all stuff that a really landlady needs (a big forridge and a good oven); no less dining room with a round table where all family can get together and taste the food; a living room with no TV, but lots of books and comfortable sofa, chares; two bedrooms (one's for me and my husband, another for guests); one room for my children (there will be the most fabulous room in the world for my darling children); and, of course, the study room; we don't need a bathroom beacuse we may live in the village, near the river). The house also may have a basement where I can hold some stuff and attic. There will be a nice courtyard, I want to gardening there. You may want to ask me, who will build the house of my dream? Well, actually I don't have any ideas about what is the difference between cornice and skirting, how to build stair with safe bannister and so on, so I think I can buy the complete one. There is no problem to buy the house of my dream with gargoyls and columns, right?

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The house of my dreams (thanks for your next corrections!)

Today I've studied some new English words about architecture and buildings and want to use them in my essay, "the house of my dreams." (**It would be better to say, "Today I studied" instead of "I've." The way you said it is grammatically correct, but usually the use of the perfective tense [I have, you have, I've, you've] is not centered around a specfic time. It's usually used to make general statements to indicate that you have done something before- not at a specific time. So "I've studied architecture- at SOME time" is different than, "Today, I studied" - Does that make sense? The way you said it is grammatically correct, but it would sound a bit strange.


I wonder that if the house of my dreams will be the two-stories. I'd like to have a lot of rooms because I have a big family. There'll be a big kitchen with all of the stuff that a really landlady(**I don't think you meant to use this word... perhaps you meant "wife?") needs- a big forridge and a good oven. No less (**not sure what you mean there**) dining room with a round table where all of my family can get together and taste the food; a living room with no TV but lots of books and comfortable sofa, chairs; two bedrooms (one's for me and my husband, another for guests); one room for my children (which will be the most fabulous room in the world for my darling children); and, of course, the study room. We don't need a bathroom beacuse we may live in the village (**no comma here**) near the river).

The house also may have a basement where I can hold some stuff, and an attic. There will be a nice courtyard; I want to gardening there.

You may want to ask me (**No comma**) who will build the house of my dreams. Well, actually, I don't have any ideas about what is the difference the difference is between cornice and skirting, or how to build stairs with a safe bannister and so on, so I think I can buy the complete one. There is no problem to buy with buying the house of my dreams with gargoyls and columns, right?

 

 

So great job! There were only a few mistakes, and most of them were based on some much more advanced concepts of grammar! You write very well in English! Punctuation may be the hardest part, but I think that you'll learn it quickly. Молодец!

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The house of my dreams (thank's for you next correction's!)

Today I've studied some new English words about architecture and buildings and want to use them in my assey essay "the house of my dreams"

I wonder that whether the house of my dreams will be the two-storeys high. I'd like to have a lot of rooms because I will have a big family. There'll be a big kitchen with all the stuff that a really real landlady housewife needs (a big forridge fridge and a good oven); no less a dining room with a round table where all family can get together and taste the food; a living room without no a TV, but lots of books and a comfortable sofa, chares chairs; two bedrooms (one's for me and my husband, the another other for the guests); one a room for my children (there will be the most fabulous room in the world for my darling children); and, of course, the study room; we don't need a bathroom ?действительно beacuse because we may live in the a village, near the a river).

The house also may have a basement where I can hold some stuff and an attic. There will be a nice courtyard, I want to do some gardening there.

You may want to ask me, who will build the house of my dreams? Well, actually I don't have any ideas about what is the difference between a cornice and a skirting, how to build stairs with a safe bannister and so on, so I think I can buy the complete one house. Am I right in saying that there is no problem to buy the house of my dreams with (gargoyls я не понимаю) and columns, right?

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It's your house of dreams...but are sure about you don't need a bathroom.I can't imagine.Maybe you thought: you don't need a swimming pool..Am I right?

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