Eliz's notebook entry: Apr 16, 2010

Yesterday,  I went down the beach to do body surfing. It was great fun gliding among the huge waves.

zuotian wo qu haibian zuo chong lang.  Hen hao wan'er yinwei zai chonglang ban shang mian wo hua xiang de hen kuai.
haishi xie= zai qizhongli lang hen da, wo huaxiangde hen kuai

昨天我去海边做冲浪。很好玩儿因为在巨浪上我滑翔的很快。

Eliz's notebook entry: Apr 16, 2010

Yesterday,  I went down the beach to do body surfing. It was great fun gliding among the huge waves.

zuotian wo qu haibian zuo chong lang.  Hen hao wan'er yinwei zai chonglang ban shang mian wo hua xiang de hen kuai.
haishi xie= zai qizhongli lang hen da, wo huaxiangde hen kuai

昨天我去海边做冲浪。很好玩儿，因为在冲浪板上面我滑翔得很快。
还是写= 在其中里浪很大我滑翔的很快。
在汉语里，"do body surfing”是个完整的短语，直接翻译成“冲浪”即可。
“儿”在普通话里是应该有的，尤其是北京人说话习惯带“儿话音”。第二句话Islanding写得很好。
It's my suggestion.

昨天我去海边冲浪。我对能在巨浪之中自如滑翔的感觉非常好
yesterday, I want down the bech to do body surfing , I felt so good that I gliding among the huge waves.

it was great fun = 太有意思 ，很好玩
I felt so good = 我感觉非常好
Here maybe ”it was great fun“ is similar to “I felt so good ”
It just my view

Eliz's notebook entry: Apr 16, 2010

Yesterday,  I went down the beach to do body surfing. It was great fun gliding among the huge waves.

zuotian wo qu haibian zuo chong lang.  Hen hao wan'er yinwei zai chonglang ban shang mian wo hua xiang de hen kuai.
haishi xie= zai qizhongli lang hen da, wo huaxiangde hen kuai

昨天我去海边做冲浪。很好玩儿因为在冲浪板上面我滑翔得很快.
还是写= 在其中里浪很大我滑翔的很快。

Hôm qua tôi xuống bãi biển để chơi lướt sóng. Thật là vui khi lướt giữa những con sóng lớn

Eliz's notebook entry: Apr 16, 2010

Yesterday,  I went down the beach to do body surfing. It was great fun gliding among the huge waves.

zuotian wo qu haibian zuo chong lang.  Hen hao wan'er yinwei zai chonglang ban shang mian wo hua xiang de hen kuai.
haishi xie= zai qizhongli lang hen da, wo huaxiangde hen kuai

昨天我去海边做冲浪。很好玩儿，因为在冲浪板上面我滑翔行得很快. 。

还是写= 在其中里浪很大我滑翔的很快。

应该写：在巨浪里我滑行得很快。