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i have got a job!!
first,i am a college student.
And not only i but also everybody had to get a job.
so we have tried to get a job since 8 month ago.
finally,i have got a job in a bank!!
and i have to get some skills of bank.
it seems very hard for me to get them,but i'll do my best.
it seems to be a busy summer vacation.
I have got a job!!
First of all, I am a college student.
And not also i but also Everybody needs to get a job." Do not use many linking words in the same sentence e.g. "and, also , also" it does not give any meaning."
So, we have tried to get a job since 8 month ago.
Finally,I have got a job in a bank!!
And I have to get some skills of bank. gain some banking skills.
It seems very hard for to me to get them, but I'll do my best.
It seems to it will be a busy summer vacation.
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