First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Leo, I am a senior student of Jinlin University. So now i I live in Chuangchun, a beautiful city located in the northeast of China. 
My hometown is Jiaxing in Zhejiang province, closed close to Shanghai. It is a wonderful city, here it isvery picturesque. 
and Manchester United is my belief [suggest - 'true faith' or 'passion']. 11 years ago, i I started to loveher. them; Wayne, Paul, Ryan and all the team are my forever [suggest - favourite] stars. 
Sometimes, maybe i I am shy, but i want to talk to everybody. 
This time I come to italki, on one hand i I want to improve my English, on the other hand, make more friends.

[You need to check your capital's especially on nouns].