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My Boring Day Off Tonight, I felt tired. I intended to go to bed earlier than usual, but I thought that I needed to practise my writing skill. So, I logged in italki.com and wrote something. The weather in this season is very hot. So, we are prone to be exhausted, and we donn't eat well. But this noon, looking at all members in my family having a good lunch, I understood that my cooking wasn't so terrible. Sometimes my allergic rhinitis develops. Today, because of running nose, I had to take a tablet to relieve this symptom. However, one of the drug's side effects is to fall asleep. Consequently, I did nothing in the afternoon. How boring my day off was!

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My Boring Day Off

Tonight, I felt tired. I intended to go to bed earlier than usual, but I thought that I needed to practise my writing skill. So, I logged in [log into or log onto ... followed by the name of the website (a noun)] italki.com and wrote something.

The weather in this season is very hot. So, we are prone to be constantly exhausted, and we donn't eat well. [Oh :) a new spelling for "don't"... :)] 

But this noon, looking at all the members in my family having a good lunch, I understood that my cooking wasn't so terrible.

Sometimes my allergic rhinitis develops [in Canada we would say "... is acting up"] . Today, because of my running nose, I had to take a tablet to relieve this symptom. However, one of the drug's side effects is to fall asleep [... is to cause drowziness]. Consequently, I did nothing in the afternoon.

How boring my day off was!

Well written... sad story :)... but definitely well written.

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I'm sorry about your day. My days off from school are like that when I don't have homework to attend to. Luckily, it's my summer break so everything is alright. Maybe I should just shut up now. XD

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