First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Learning English is particularly important in this age time period. I want to practice it more and more constently consistently, so that I will be ready to study abroad and make some friends from other countries.
My mother language is Chinese and I grew up here in China.
My hobbies interests are diverse: sports, music, reading, hiking, and especially eating! Come on, be my friends right now!

> Always capitlise 'I.'

> "Practise" is a noun and "practice" is a verb.

> Always include a single space after a comma or period.

> "Hobbies" should involve actions, and since listing off various things such as "sports" and "music" isn't quite a set of actions I changed it to "interests." If you want to say "hobbies," then try: "My hobbies are diverse: playing sports, listening to music, reading, hiking, and eating!"

> One exclamation mark is all you need, no more.

Keep it up!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Learning English is particularly important in this day and age.I want to practise it more and more consistently, so that i will be ready to study abroad and make some friends from other counties.
My mother language tongue is Chinese and i grew up here.
My hobbies are diverse, I like sports,music,reading,hiking,especially eating!!!Come on,be my friends right now!!

Great entry! Keep up your English study.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Learning English is particularly important in this age. I want to practice it more and more consistently, so that I will be ready to study abroad and make some friends from other counties.
My mother language is Chinese, and I grew up in China.
My hobbies are diverse: sports, music, reading, hiking, and especially eating!!! Come on, be my friends right now!!

Great job! Your English is good!