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my visit to 2010 shanghai world expo for a week this summer ,my friend and i went to shanghai to visit the expo.however,to my surprise there so many people,full of people,people and people.there are about 450000 persons visting the expo everyday. oh my god . before i went to shanghai ,my friend told me that its hard to visit the expo,because if someone wants to visit the china pawilion or other popular pavilion, he should get up before 5:00am and squeeze into the subway at that time . so imet the scene while to get into the expo yard. afterwards, before i went into the saudi arabia,i saw there are full of people,i need to queue for about 6 hours , oh my god 6 hours .and i did. its worth to queue for long ,the pacilion impressed me. afer that i wisit ahout 30 pavvilions ,including china, france,italy ,united arab emirates,denmark,spanish ,tortugal....... and many other urban best praceices,shuch as madrid ,bilibao ,barceloma,liverpool, london......... every pavilion avg takes me about 3hours to queue before went into. but i enjoy the journey, its widened my horizon.

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my visit to 2010 shanghai world expo


About one week of this summer, my friend and I went to Shanghai to visit the expo. However, I was surprised that there are many people, who all come here for Expo. Actually, there are about 450000 visitors explore in the Expo every day.  I was astonished by this data.
Before I went to shanghai, my friend told me that it is hard to visit the Expo because the lines for visiting the China pavilion or the popular pavilions are so long, it takes long time to get in. Therefore, we should get up before 5:00 am and then rush into the subway at that time. I saw this crazy and crowded scene while stepped into the Expo. yard. Afterwards, I went into the Saudi Arabia Pavilion, I saw there were full of people, I lined up for 6 hours. I thought that was the craziest thing I did in my life, but it was worthy even though was 6 hours waiting. The pavilion impressed me so much.
After that, I continued to visit others, about 30 pavilions, including China, France, Italy ,United Arab Emirates, Denmark, Span ,Tortuga....... and many other urban best praceices, such as Madrid ,Bilbao ,Barceloma, Liverpool, London......... every pavilion takes me about 3 hours to queue before I get into. No matter what, I enjoyed this journey of Shanghai Expo; it widened my vision of the world and brought the new thoughts about the various cultures into my life.
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You are so patient to queue for such a long time!!! If I were you, I would doubt it... But anyways, it seems well worthwhile. Good for you!
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Expo sounds like a total nightmare. I'm glad I haven't been!

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