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Happening I talked with my friend on the skype. I had a lot of fun. After that I was supposed to be the online English lesson. But,my computer crashed. So,I didn't receive a lesson. I was little down :( I pull myself, I hope to lesson again soon.

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Happening

I spoke with my friend on the skype.

I had a lot of fun.

After that, I was suppose to have an online English lesson, but my computer crashed .

So, I didn't get to take a lesson.

I was little down :(

I pull myself, I hope to take a lesson again soon.

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I talked with my friend on the skype.


I had a lot of fun.


After that I had was supposed to be the an online English lesson.

However/But my computer crashed so I couldn't didn't receive a have the lesson.

I was a little down :(

I pulled myself together and I hope to have the lesson again soon.

 

ジャッキーのバージョン。

Today I had a lot of fun talking to my friend on Skype.
After that I had an online English class/lesson.

But because my computer crashed, I couldn't attend the class.

I was/felt a little down but I pulled myself together. I hope to have the lesson again soon.

 

よくできました。 もっと接続詞を使ってみてください!接続詞を適切にと、文章が自然になります。

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