LOVE IS STRANGE

It was a special day, she was near him, both together holding hands facing the balcony. The dawn was coming, minute by minute, he asked her to come closer with her body next to him, in order to witness the dawn together, she agreed strongly shaking hands, she layed her head on his chest soon approaching dawn, filling the valley illuminating glow everywhere. The light lit up their faces in love, was an unforgettable moment it seems that both wanted it to last all eternity, time was passing, and the dismissal was imminent, it was undisputed that neither wished to separate, she had to travel to their hometown, and also return to his family, kindred spirits who both agreed one night, for some reason, the two lovers, who would soon be separated as soon as they could.
She asked if he knew what love was, to which he replied smiling, 'I never loved as done until now. Followed by a question that said: What if you could stay with me forever?. He answered, feel that my soul was free, feel that everything I can get to flying like little birds under heaven.
good work it's a lovely story but don't forget to use past simple tense, and past continous instead of present and present continous when writing a story