First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi! My name is Lee Won-you. I am a Korean. My English name is Lily. You can call me Lily.
I am glad happy to introduce myself to you.
I am 40 years old and I am a housewife.
I am outgoing and active. So, although I am a housewife, I am very busy doing this and that many things.

I have been doing volunteer work for 7 years. I repair books at a library for free.
Sometimes I teach librarians and volunteers how to repair a book.
Last year I had a chance to teach foreingers how to repair a book. If I had spoken English very well, they would have understood better.
I want to speak English very well, So I want to show in order to share my experience and knowledge with many people in other countries. my experience and knowledge.
Please, help me ^^;;.

My native language is Korean. and I was born and grew up raised in Korea.
I live in Young-in. It is the north of Seoul, the capital of Korea.
Seoul It takes me 40 minutes by bus to reach Seoul.

I like to go mountain climbing, going for a walks, ride a bike riding, reading a books, playing a the piano and playing an ocarina. I like to watching a musicals and I like a tapdancing as well.

I love all of them.

만나서 반가워요 ^^

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

HI! My name is Lee won-you . I'm a Korean. My English name is Lily. You can call me Liy (Lily).
I am glad to meet you all. I would like to introduce myself (to you).
I am 40 years old. I am a housewife.
I am outgoing and active. So, although I am a housewife, I am vey (very) busy doing this and that.

I am a housewife. But I am actually really outgoing and active. I am always busy doing this and that.
I have been doing volunteer work for 7 years. I repair books at a the library for free.
Sometimes I teach librarians and volunteers how to repair a book books.
Last year I had a chance to teach foreingers foreigners how to repair a book books. If I had spoken English very well, they would have understood better.
I want to speak English very well, So I want to can share my knowledge and experiences to many people in other countries my experience and knowledge.

I want to speak English well because I want to share my knowledge and experiences to people in other countries.
Please, help me ^^;;.

My native language is Korean. and I was born and grew up in Korea.
I live in Young-in. It is in the north of Seoul, the capital of Korea.
Seoul takes me 40 minutes by bus. It takes me 40 minutes to reach Seoul by bus.

I like to go mountain climbing, go for a walk, ride a bike, read a book, play a piano and play an ocarina (이게 뭔데요? ^^). I like to watch a musical. I like a tapdance (Do you mean 'I like to tapdance'?). I enjoy watching musical shows and tapdancing.

I love all of them.

잘 하시네요!