It will be summer vacation soon
It will be children's summer vacation soon. My children are looking forward to the summer vacation. A pool, a festival, a fireworks display・・・. There is a lot of pleasure to it.
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It will be summer vacation soon
It will be the children's summer vacation soon. My children are looking forward to their summer vacation. There will be time spent at the pool, a festival and a fireworks display. There is a lot of pleasure to it... It wil be a lot of fun! (more natural).
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Hi,tim80110. Thank you for correcting my sentence. It was very intelligible. I am still writing the sentence with investigation. Also next, if there is a mistake in my sentence, please let me know.
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