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Kamy's Birthday!! =D Today is a very special day!!! Today's kamy's birthday!! Kamy is a friend of mine, and i think she's great. She's younger than me, but she's very cool!! =D She doesn't live near my house, so i didn't visit her. I'm visiting her next sunday!! =D

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Kamy's Birthday!! =D

Today is a very special day!!! Today is kamy's birthday!! Kamy is a friend of mine, and i think she's great. She's younger than me, but she's very cool!! =D She doesn't live near my house, so i didn't visit her. I'm visiting her next sunday!! =D
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Kamy's Birthday!! =D

Today is a very special day!!! Today's kamy's birthday!! Kamy is a friend of mine, and i think she's great. She's younger than me, but she's very cool!! =D She doesn't live near my house, so i didn't visit her. I'm visiting her next sunday!! =D

In my opinion, It would be better if you use I will visit her next sunday or I´m gonna visit her next sunday".  And the expression "so I didn´t visit her, i think it´s better "so, I´m not used to visit her".

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