A cool day

today is a cool day. I got up on at 8 o'clock, clear washed my face,brushed my teeth, do up  did my hear hair, then go went to work. On my way, I buy bought some butterfly cake, which looks look like have the shape of butterfly butterflies for breakfast.

BUT You used the word "some" which is used for uncountable objects (things like water, rice, and sugar cannot be counted. you cannot say one rice.. two rices.. three waters). Cakes that have the shape of butterflies is countable; therefore, it is better to say "a few pieces of cakes"

It's rain was raining so I feel felt so cool in a summer day, I was joviality jovial when I watched the people who was eating breakfast while walking quickly in the street.When I was walking into to my office, It's was just 9 o'clock. If I will be were happy every day, In every morning I will have butterfly cake, and I can work hard every day, I think every day is will be a cool day.