my summer holiday
tomorrow , i will go to work, i use my summer holiday to earn some money.so i feel very happy now.but i far away with my parents,i miss them very.i think i am not a indepent people, i don't like lonely,i dislike do somethings by myself, i like many friend company with me.
in addtion, i will improve my english, so i apply to a english class,which cost me one thousand RMB,it is too expensive.so i must learn it carefully. i can't waste my money.
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Where do you want to learn your English? Any foreign training institute in your city?
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My Summer Holiday
Tomorrow , I will go to work. I will use my summer holiday to earn some money. So I feel very happy now, but I am far away with from my parents. I miss them very much. I think I am not an independent people person. I don't like lonely loneliness. I dislike doing somethings things by myself. I like many friends to accompany with me.
In addition, I will want to improve my English, so I apply have applied to an English class, which cost me one thousand RMB. It is too expensive, so I must learn it carefully. I can't waste my money.
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wanted to correct you (you've got a lot of tiny mistakes there) but it was easy to understand so instead here's a reply :-P your post made me smile as I'm in a very similar situation, trying to earn some money to fund my Chinese studies on university, also being far from home (well not THAT far, I can easily go home every week or two but that'd be a waste of money for travel expenses). So I hope we'll make it!
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