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People are busy doing different things that they can do few things well. Agree or disagree? In today’s world, people are required to master various skills to show their abilities. Due to the quick life pace, people have to do different things together. Therefore, some people claim that when busy doing different things one can hardly do most of the things well. In my submission, I agree with such statement. Doing different things may distract people’s attention. When doing different things in the same period of time, it’s hard for us to focus on the tough problems. Then it will probably result in failure. For example, once my aunt looked after her baby at home while cooking at the same time. Suddenly the doorbell rang. It was the express delivery. She went to open the door and talked to the man and forgot about the baby and the cooking. Then the tragedy came. The food got burned and the baby fell from the bed. You can see how hard it is to concentrate on different things together. People will suffer high pressure in doing different things busily. Our mind will run in a high speed which may finally bring about anxiety and upset. How can people work well with a bad metal health? Furthermore, metal problems always influence physical health. They weaken the immune system and make people get ill easily. At last, the superworker won’t be able to work anymore. Not to mention doing things well. When people are busy doing different things, they show less responsibility. Since that they have too many things to take care at the same time, they won’t have the consciousness and the energy to do every one of them perfectly. According to a investigation conducted by Gallup Organization, the mistake rate would increase 6.78% when one worker was asked to do 1 additional work. It means people are more careless when doing more work at the same time.

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I agree. That happens to me all the time when I had two large assignments due the same day.

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