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Relations. I love sea, when ever i feel happy or i feel sad i always went to the beach to share my feelings with sea. If i am sad sea always take my tears and when i return back from sea i always feel relax. No one can hear my crying voice in the noise of waves, and even i am happy i feel the comfort which cold wet sand always deliver to me. I love sea Yesterday evening while i was on the beach , walking on wet sand.I thought " No matter how much strong we are but we can not see a relation dying.Specially when its about your special one. i asked a question to my mind " then what to do in this situation ?" is there any remedy to save the relation ? the answer was " No" it is About a Doctor and a dying patient who want to try everything to save his patient, to save a life. Medicines, Injections. Oxygen, and even some electric shocks...... /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/-------------------- Life is over. & in the end only Tears, memories. I understand why some one said love if life. I felt it dying a relation is like dying a human. i feel it first time in my childhood when my first pet a rabbit died.i love my rabbit and i cried a lot.I felt there is not more life for me.i felt it when one day i found my parrot flew away. I found his cage door was open, I cried a lot. Then my mama told me he flew to bring happiness for you . I waited for him a long time. every bird in the sky seems my parrot.i kept my hopes alive, i know he is some where in the sky i still have a hope one day my parrot will return to me with lot of happiness. I love sea. I love sea

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Tini.写的很好。你的文章让我想起了张雨生的“大海”。希望你一切安好!
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I love the sea cuz it gives me piece inside..Don't you think it's the snoring of the earth? haha
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i hope next time you go to the beach because you feel happy.-----------------\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/
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Well done. I feel that I'm so lucky to see this.
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good. You write is very good

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