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Today Today was a really exhausting day for myself. I helped out at a festival in my school, where I run to and fro all (the)<-- ? time. Now I am happy that we've finished(and also tired). Same like in the entry before I just don't know what to write about. Oh, and I would really like to talk with someone in English on Skype (or only write). Thank you in advance for correcting this. :) ----------------- Heute war ein wirklich anstrengender Tag für mich. Ich habe bei einem Fest an meiner Schule ausgeholfen und musste die ganze Zeit hin und her rennen. Jetzt bin ich froh, dass wir fertig damit sind (und auch müde). Genau wie in meinem letzten Eintrag weiß ich nicht über was ich schreiben soll. Oh und Ich würde sehr gerne mit jemandem auf Englisch über Skype reden (oder nur schreiben) Danke im Voraus für's Korrigieren. :)

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Today was a really exhausting day for myself *me*. I helped out at a festival in *at* my school, where I run to and fro (more natural: here and there) all *the* time. Now I am happy that we've finished (and also tired). Same like *Just as* in the *last/previous* entry before I just don't know what to write about. Oh, and I would really like to talk with someone in English on Skype (or only *just* write). 
Thank you in advance for correcting this. :) 


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Heute war ein wirklich anstrengender Tag für mich. Ich habe bei einem Fest an meiner Schule ausgeholfen und musste die ganze Zeit hin und her rennen. Jetzt bin ich froh, dass wir fertig damit sind (und auch müde). Genau wie in meinem letzten Eintrag weiß ich nicht über was ich schreiben soll. Oh und Ich würde sehr gerne mit jemandem auf Englisch über Skype reden (oder nur schreiben)
Danke im Voraus für's Korrigieren. :)

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good luck
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Thank you very much Mohammed.
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Dear René, Try to avoid thinking in you mother-tong when writing in English. To master a foreign language and to be understood by English native speakers you have to be take the shortest path to their minds. instead of saying 'Today was a really exhausting day for myself' you could say ' I have had an exhausting day'. You see your sentence seemed to contain a redundancy because naturally you are the only person who is supposed to feel the exhaustion. Nevertheless your English seems very good in grammar and construction. best wishes Mohammed

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