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a funny day yesterday l am very very happy!because l dated my brother and my cousin and we have fun all day! we like a team,every time we gether,we would have fun.so l like being with them. yesterday we took a lot of pictures,I like to take photos, as well as my cousin.we can share funny photos each other when we meeting. this photo is my me,thank you for my cousin photographed me.

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A Fun Day

Yesterday l was very very happy!  Because l dated went out with my brother and my cousin, and we had fun all day!
We are like a team, every time we're together, we would have fun. So l like being with them.
Yesterday we took a lot of pictures. I like to take photos, as well as as does my cousin. We can share funny photos with each other when we meeting.
This photo is my of me, thanks to you for my cousin who photographed me.

Hi! ^^

Capital letters are important, please don't ignore them (this also applies to you, Geoffrey).

Also, a space after every punctuation mark.  We like "white space" when reading.

Most stories are written in past tense, so keep the past tense consistent.

"Fun" = enjoyable.  "Funny" = amusing, strange, unusual.  Not always a good meaning, it can suggest being uncomfortable.

"Dated" is only for boyfriends!!  Use "go out with" (friends family and boyfriends) or "hang out with" (friends and family).

"As well as" can mean "also", but it could mean "as good as" too.  "As does my cousin" adds a verb to make the sentence clear: he also likes taking photos.

Hope that helps... cool photo, by the way!
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a funny day

yesterday l was very very happy! Because l dated with my brother and my cousin and we did have fun all day!
We like a team,every time we gether,we would have fun.so l like being with them.
yesterday we took a lot of pictures,I like taking photoes, my cousin likes, too. We can share funny photos  with each other when we meeting.
The person in this photo is my me, thank my cousin who took photoes for me.
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to pomme-hf：yes！it is！^_^
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Hi, sounds great. It seems that you enjoyed yourself fullly with them. ^ ^

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