每天我用中文和英语写日记!(`・д・´)
if i use wrong expression, please tell me!
如果我有打错的地方,请告诉我!
我今天从下午两点半上课,我起了床十点钟。
我经常坐特快去大学,可是今天坐普通电车。
所以到大学要两个半小时。(平常要一个半小时)
我到了大学早一点儿,练钢琴一个多小时。
星期二我常常在大学练钢琴。
我家也有钢琴,可是大学的钢琴比我的很好。
所以我有时间的时候,在大学练。
I have classes from 14:30 today, I woke up at 10 o'clock.
I usually get on a limited express to go to university,
but today it is a local train that I took.
So it took me two hours and half.(always it takes me one hours and half)
I arrived at university early, I practiced the piano one hour more.
I often practice it in university on Tuesday.
I also have a piano in my house,
but pianos of university is better than mine.
This is why i have time, practice it in university.
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每天我用中文和英语写日记!(`・д・´)
if i use wrong expression, please tell me!如果我有打错的地方,请告诉我!
我今天十点钟起了床,下午两点半开始上课(前后顺序转换一下比较好,起床—>上课)
我经常坐特快去大学,可是今天坐普通电车。
所以到大学要两个半小时。(平常要一个半小时)
我早一点儿就到了大学,练了钢琴一个多小时。(“早一点儿”不要放在最后)
星期二我常常在大学练钢琴。
我家也有钢琴,可是大学的钢琴比我的要好。 (“要”在这里的意思相当于“than”)
所以我有时间的时候,在大学练。
I have classes from 14:30 today, I woke up at 10 o'clock.
I usually get on a limited express to go to university,
but today it is a local train that I took.
So it took me two and a half hours.(两个半小时有两种说法,“two hours and a half ”和“two and a half hours”)
(always it takes me one hour and a half)
I arrived at university early, I practised the piano one hour more.(practice是形容词,practise是动词)
I often practice it in university on Tuesday.
I also have a piano in my house,
but pianos of university are better than mine. (pianos—>are)
That's why i practice it in university in my spare time.
感谢看我的日记(⊃д・`)
I'm glad that you read my dialy!
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每天我用中文和英语写日记!(`・д・´)
我只会帮助你在英文方面 -- 不好意思。I have classes from 14:30 today, I woke up at 10 o'clock.
I have classes starting at 14:30 today. I woke up at 10 o'clock.
It's ok to use short sentences.
I usually get on a limited express to go to university, but today it is a local train that I took.
I usually get on a limited express train to go to the university, but today I took a local train.
"it is a local train..." is passive construction. It is better to write directly / in the active voice.
So it took me two hours and half.(always it takes me one hours and half)
So today it took me two and a half hours. It usually takes me an hour and a half.
I arrived at university early, I practiced the piano one hour more.
I arrived at the university early, and I practiced the piano for an hour.
Logically this seems strange, since it seems you should have arrived late...
I often practice it in university on Tuesday.
I usually practice piano at the university on Tuesday.
I also have a piano in my house, but pianos of university is better than mine.
I also have a piano in my house, but the pianos at the university are better than mine.
This is why i have time, practice it in university.
This is why I like to practice at the university.
感谢看我的日记(⊃д・`)
I'm glad that you read my dialy!
I'm glad that you read my diary!
Great work!
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加油
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谢谢你们*+。ヾ(´▽`)ノ。+*
我每天坚持学中文!
今天也写日记。
如果你们有时间的话,看看那个日记:)
我每天坚持学中文!
今天也写日记。
如果你们有时间的话,看看那个日记:)
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坚持、加油。我看好你呦
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