Harmonious World

Harmonious World
At first sight of the drawing, I am my Eyes were caught by the six lovely children with shining smiles. Four girls and two boys in different colors, from different continents and different races are hand in hand, happily making a circle. In the center of it, there is a symbolic earth. [Four girls and two boys in different races are holding hands together embracing the earth, which symbolizes a harmonious world shared with all humankind.]
As it vividly illustrated in the thought-provoking picture, harmonious world becomes an increasingly heat issue concerned by people on around the globe /global people. Two reasons as follows, In my opinion, account there are two reasons for this phenomenon. On the one hand, owing to peace and development, the theme of present world / due to the calling of our times, peace and development, harmony turns to the consensus of all nations. On the other hand, facing with the irresistible trend of globalization, every country and region is seeking a win-win method to coexist in the world full of fierce competition. Consequently, such a favorable concept is brought to people's eyesight mind, and the importance of it / its importance is in a quickening rise.
Since people in mounting number [Wortfülle, weil es nachher "more and more" gibt] are taking harmonious world more and more seriously, what can we do to achieve this goal? First of all, a complete system of fair international rules is in need to regulate the action of each participant. Furthermore, just as Confucius once said, "Don't do onto others what you don't want to be done onto you" [Bei diesem Zitat sehe ich aber keinen Zusammenhang mit der Harmonie. Wenn man sich nicht in andere Angelegenheit einmischt, wird die Welt harmonierend sein?], which has been graved on the wall of the headquarter of the united nations. Only every nation spare by sparing no effort to create a harmonious atmosphere, can the aim be finally attained.

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