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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hai, my name is Rei , I'm 24 year old Im learning english right now why i want to improve my english? because i think english is important for my life, especially for my work. I really appreciate someone who want to help me to be a good english speaker, so hope to see you ,and talk with you face to face or webcam maybe. hehe thanks and nice to meet you.. see ya

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, my name is Rei , I'm 24-year-old
Im learning English right now
Why I want to improve my English?
because I think english is important for my life, especially for my work.
I really appreciate anyone who want to help me to be a good English speaker, so hope to see you ,and talk with you face to face or webcam maybe. hehe
thanks and nice to meet you..
see ya

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Hai Hi, my name is Rei. I'm 24 years old. I'm learning English right now. 

 

Why do I want to improve my English? Because I think English is important for to my life, especially for my work.


I would really appreciate someone anyone who wants to help me to be a good English speaker, so I hope to see you and talk with you face-to-face or by webcam maybe. Heh, heh.

 
Thanks and nice to meet you. See ya!

 

"I" is capitalized when you are referring to yourself. Also, capitalize the names of languages (for example, English, Chinese, Russian, etc.).

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a little grammar direction and some new vocabulary would help :)
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Wow your English is actually not that bad^^ good luck with learning English

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