Death Story
Recently I found out that one of my virtual friends has died,whose writings I was used to read and enjoy. She was a nice person and I really was familiar with her.
Now I'm depressed and don't know how to believe this incident,because I've never lost any of my close frineds and it's really hard for me to accept this event.
Oh it's unbelievable,what's going on around me? Now I'm so confused and dizzy.
Still I have her comments on my blog and occasionally read them and regret a lot.
:(
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Death Story
Recently, I found out that one of my virtual friends has died, whose writings I was used to read and enjoy. She was a nice person and I really was familiar with her (we were good friends). this is more common and fluent - your phrase is technically correct.
Now I'm depressed and don't know how to believe this incident, because I've never lost any of my close friends frineds and it's really hard for me to accept this event.
Oh it's unbelievable, what's going on around me? Now I'm so confused and dizzy.
Still I I still have her comments on my blog and occasionally read them and regret a lot.
:(
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It seems wrong to make corrections to something so sad and personal.
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When I see there is no correction for my entry then I think everything is OK and all sentences are written right! Please tell me if I have mistakes or not.Thanks.
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So sorry to hear about that.
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it is so bad:(. I am sorry to hear that but u should know that it is a fact and should cope with it.
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