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something that i wanna say last month ,i have finished the university extrance exam.my senior high school's life is over...um..something sadness.. now,i'm really wanna go to college!!! it must be interesting!!! and i hope i can adapt there as soon as possible~ wow,i forget to say,yesterday,i went to the cinema with my cousin~we watched a movie named PAINTED SKIN..it's impressive! Xiaowei is a demon, because of love,she saved Wangsheng's life and Wangsheng's wife's life as well..but when she do it,she has broken demon world's rules already..so she was trapped in the hell for hundred years..day after day,she got reborn and this time she wanna be a mankind...finelly she got what her wish,however,in order to save the others,she have to chose to sacrifice herself...she only have one day in life,as a person!! maybe this kind of story is really banal,but i'm still moved by this,it's true love!! everyone can search the internet for PAINTED SKIN...it's worth watching!

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something that I wanna say

Last month ,I have finished the university entrance exam.Finally,my senior high school's life is over...um..something sadness.. something后面接形容词

Now,I‘m really wanna go to college!!! It must be interesting!!! and I hope I can adapt there as soon as possible~

Wow,I forget to say,yesterday,I went to the cinema with my cousin~we watched a movie named PAINTED SKIN..it was impressive! Xiaowei is a demon, because of love,she saves Wangsheng's life and Wangsheng's wife's life as well..but when she does it,she has broken demon world's rules already..so she has been/is(个人意见,不知道这样改是否合理) trapped in the hell for (several) hundred year(s)..day after day,she got reborn and this time she wanna be a mankind...finally she got what her wish,however,in order to save the others,she has to choose to sacrifice herself...she only has one day in life as a person!!

Maybe this kind of story is really banal,but I'm still moved by this,it's true love!!
everyone can search the internet for PAINTED SKIN...it's worth watching!

 

将电影内容最好用一个时态,当然这得看情况来定,也可以用多个时态...

我还没看“画皮2”

这个至于它平不平庸,我倒觉得只要是你自己喜欢就行,别人怎么想都无所谓:)

 

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