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something that I wanna say
Last month ,I have finished the university entrance exam.Finally,my senior high school's life is over...um..something sadness.. something后面接形容词
Now,I‘m really wanna go to college!!! It must be interesting!!! and I hope I can adapt there as soon as possible~
Wow,I forget to say,yesterday,I went to the cinema with my cousin~we watched a movie named PAINTED SKIN..it was impressive! Xiaowei is a demon, because of love,she saves Wangsheng's life and Wangsheng's wife's life as well..but when she does it,she has broken demon world's rules already..so she has been/is(个人意见,不知道这样改是否合理) trapped in the hell for (several) hundred year(s)..day after day,she got reborn and this time she wanna be a mankind...finally she got what her wish,however,in order to save the others,she has to choose to sacrifice herself...she only has one day in life as a person!!
Maybe this kind of story is really banal,but I'm still moved by this,it's true love!!
everyone can search the internet for PAINTED SKIN...it's worth watching!
将电影内容最好用一个时态,当然这得看情况来定,也可以用多个时态...
我还没看“画皮2”
这个至于它平不平庸,我倒觉得只要是你自己喜欢就行,别人怎么想都无所谓:)
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