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About Me I I live in Fujian,China.I can speak Chinese and Min Nan.I want to learnning English.So I come to this community.I wish there I can meet a lot of friend,and we can study together.My E-mail is [email protected] wish meet penfriend.I like NBA.I'm a fan of Thunder‘s.Though they lost they champion in this season,I will support they go on.Usually I like watch movie.I went to cimena watch Madagascar III,I very like the four penguins,they are clever,cute,humorous.This all,today,I go to have my lunch.Welcom to criticisming my work.Thank you.

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About Me I

I live in Fujian,China. I can speak Chinese and Min Nan. I want to learnning English. S, so I've come to this community. I wish there hope I can meet a lot of friends here, and we can study together. My E-mail is [email protected]. I wish want to meet a penfriend. I like NBA. I'm a fan of the Thunder‘s. Though they lost they championship in this season, I will continue to support them. they go on Usually I like watching movies. I went to the cimena to watch Madagascar III, I very really like the four penguins, they are clever, cute, and humorous. Thisat is all, for today, I am going to have my lunch. You are Wwelcome to criticisming criticize my work. Thank you.

 

You must earn to use the space bar! I know when you type in Chinese you dont really use it, but in English you must. Every single yellow mark here is where you needed to press space! In English it is very hard to read work that does not use spaces, You must put a space after commas and full stops!

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About Me I

I live in Fujian,China.I can speak Chinese and Min Nan.I want to learnning English,so I came to this community.I wish there I cancould meet a lot of friends,and we can study together.My E-mail is [email protected] wish to meet penfriends.I like the NBA.I'm a fan of the Thunder‘s. Although they lost they champion in this season,I will support themthey go on.Usually I like to watch movies.I went to the cimena to watch Madagascar III. I very like the four penguins very much.They are very clever,cute, and humorous.This is all today.I go towill have my lunch.You are welcome to criticisize my work.Thank you.

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