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Going to School To day is the first time my little daughter go to kindregarten school. She is very exicited. She woke up early in the morning, took a bath, change cloth and prepare her bag. I accompany her, I really love to take care my daughter. have a nice day my little daughter.

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Going to School

To day is the first time my little daughter go to kindregarten school. She is very exicited. She woke up early in the morning, took a bath, change cloth and prepare her bag. I accompany her, I really love to take care my daughter. have a nice day my little daughter.

 

Today is the first time my little daughter will go to kindergarten.

(or: Today, my little daughter will go to kindergarten for the first time.

or: My little daughter will go to school at kindergarten for the first time today. But to be consistent with the rest of the journal entry, it should be past tense: My little daughter went to kindergarten for the first time today.)

She is very excited. She woke up early in the morning, took a bath, changed clothes, and prepared her bag. I accompanied her. I really love to take care of my daughter. Have a nice day, my little daughter!

 

 

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