A tour to Nanjing
Before two days, I had been to Nanjing Tangshan with my friends.What a fun and funny jorney.
When we started going on the bullet train, we almost missed the train because one of my friend looked wrong time. Fortunately,we still catched the train. I was excited when the bullet train started working.
After two hours,we arrived in Nanjing.Then we took taxi to Tangshan. The enviroment of hotel was fantastic. A big room, beautiful scene...... We enjoyed hot spring on the roof. In the evening, we saw dracula movie on the bed.
The second day was coming. We went to the most biggest Asian water park.thrilling artificial tsunami and slide made us screamed.
This is the first time I went out just with my frineds. We spent happy time for these two days and I would never forget.
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A tour to Nanjing
Two days ago, I went to Nanjing Tangshan with my friends.What a fun and funny journey.
When we started going on the bullet train, we almost missed the train because one of my friend looked at the wrong time. Fortunately,we still caught the train. I was excited when the bullet train started moving.
After two hours,we arrived in Nanjing.Then we took a taxi to Tangshan. The enviroment of hotel was fantastic. A big room, beautiful scenery...... We enjoyed a hot spring on the roof. In the evening, we saw dracula movie on the bed.
The second day came. We went to the biggest Asian water park. The thrilling artificial tsunami and slide made us scream.
This is the first time I went out just with my frineds. We had a good time for these two days and I will never forget them.
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Ttwo days ago I was at nanjing with my friends. What a delightful journey. We almost did not caught the train, because one of my friends mistook the departing time. Fortunately we caught it. It was really exiting when the bullet train started moving. Two hours after we arrived to Nanjing. Then, we took a taxi to Tangshan the environment if the hotel was fantastic. A beautiful room, marvelous scenery... We enjoyed the hot springs at the roof. At the evening, we saw dracula's movie while at bed. The syncing day we went to asian's biggest water par. The thrilling artificial tsunami and slide made as scream a lot. This I'd the first time I went out with friends only... We had a delightful time for those two days; I will never forget them.
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