First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hii
i'm kareem from giza,egypt ,i'm trying to develop my english language by speak with foreign people to improve my english rapidly. i'm electrical engineer and i hope to complete my eduction path and do my master degree.

i hope to have friends from this site and help together to exchange our cultures.

Correction:

Hi,

I'm Kareem from Giza, Egyp.  I'm trying to develop -improve is better- my English language rapidly by speaking with foreign people -native speakers-  I'm an electrical engineer & hope to complete my education & get a Master Degree.  I also hope to make friends on this website & exchange each other's cultures.

Hi,

I'm Kareem from Giza, Egyp.  I'm trying to improve  my English language rapidly by speaking with native speakers. I'm an electrical engineer & hope to complete my education & get a Master Degree.  I also hope to make friends on this website & exchange each other's cultures.