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pls help me improve my writing~ Being in the spotlight of the entire society, sports stars get a great many incomes which above those of others. Some people believe that talented people have the right to get more wealth while others disagree and think it's an unfair way to distribute social resources. I'll discuss both these opinions following and give my own concern. Sports professionals who are born with talent are one in a thousand. As for this issue, some people maintain that they deserve the wealth. Furthermore, athletes trained very hard to achieve the ultimate victory under tremendous pressure. Some players even have to get exposure by the media and have no privacy. Considering accordingly, sportsman should earn more. Those who thought this kind of distribution is inequitable claim on a lower income in other professions such as science and technology. Sport stars get their income in a totally different approach which contains their fame. Scientists contribute their wisdom to our society but earned much less. Also proficient at a specific field but cannot compare with a sports player. From my point of view, it is reasonable that athletes have a particular way to share social wealth as a specialty occupation. They do sacrifice a lot. Nevertheless, even take their rare talent into account. The money they earned is still incredibly numerous. That kind of distribution also needs adjustment.

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I don't think the scientist earned less! Our country support science and technology very much.

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