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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm Ling from China, currently I live in the south of France. In fact I studied in the University of France then I find a job here. I was an assistant of sales director in a photovoltaic company which in charge to install solar panel on the roof of building. I have been more than 2 year in this firm and I was taken such experiences and knowledge. But now I want to change the direction of my career.I’m willing looking for a job in the field of international trade. So that I can take my advantage of Chinese language and of inter-culture in the same time I can avoid my small defect as no speak French like a really native French speaker; and this is a job I really want to do. So I quit my job and I meet my difficult quickly. As English is the most important language of whole world, I need speak well too with another countries‘s clients or coworkers or someone who can’t understand Chinese either France. I had a interview two weeks ago, since I didn’t practice English longtime and I was so nervous during my interview, importunely I didn’t get this position. That why I’m here now, I want to improve my English and if I can help some people like me (having trouble in language) that would be my pleasure. I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks for everyone who help /will help me. Thank you guys; you are such kind woman /man

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm Ling from China. Currently I live in the south of France. In fact I studied in the University of France then I found a job here. I was an assistant to the sales director in a photovoltaic company which is in charge of installing solar panels on the roofs of buildings. I have been in this firm more than two years and I have gained much experiences and knowledge. But now I want to change the direction of my career. I’m willing looking for a job in the field of international trade  so that I can take my advantage of Chinese language and of inter-culture in the same time I can avoid my small defect, such as not speaking French like a really native French speaker; and this is a job I really want to do. So I quit my job and I met my difficulty quickly. As English is the most important language of whole world, I need to speak well too with another countries‘s clients or coworkers or someone who can’t understand Chinese or French. I had an interview two weeks ago, since I didn’t practice English in a long time and I was so nervous during my interview, unfortunately I didn’t get this position. That why I’m here now, I want to improve my English and if I can help some people like me (having trouble in language) that would be my pleasure.
I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks for everyone who help / will help me.
Thank you guys; you are such kind women and men.

 

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I must to say I’m impressed with your English skill. I’m interested by your topic ‘一件事的两个方面’ as well. I tried to write in English version and put on my notebook. 个人来说,我喜欢选第一类人做朋友,而且我自己也是属于第一类,我自己喜欢独立,有自己的空间,你呢?
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Looks like your written English is pretty good! I hope you can find a conversation partner there in France. The best I can offer you here is to mutually correct our Chinese/English written communication.

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