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journey,,,, for a long time ,i am always on journey ,,go to different places from beijing ,and then back .different reasons for my different journey ,some bcz of travelling ,some bcz of working ,and this time is bcz of studying .i am a university student,but i have other hobbies ,i like activity ,so i am also a student in a Fitness coach school,,its hard to learn everything ,in university,,everyday facing to computer ,and making program,its so upset when having no thinkning in mind ,computer network made me headache everyday ,,in aother school ,every day ,ABS made me cant walk for two weeks ,pain in all body,Pilates made my belly pain for another two weeks ,,Spinning and Kickboxing made me wanna stop to take rest every minute,,and now ,will take class for Aerobic dance,,i am a little afraid ,people like dancing ,they like enjoy from dancing ,but dancing and dance trainning is different ,dancing makes people happy ,tranning makes people suffure,bcz of none stop dancing for 2hours ...wil i do well in this time ,i dont know ,just hope for good ,hope it will be another good journey ,,

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Journey...

I have wanted to leave Beijing and go on a journey to different places for a long time. I want to travel for study or for work. I am currently a university student but I do many other things, I like to be active, that is why I am also a student at a fitness coaching school. It's hard to learn everthing at university, always staring at the computer, writing programs which is hard when you have no ideas. The computer network isn't very good and is always causing me trouble.

Everyday at my other school I work so hard doing Pilates, Spinning and Kickboxing that I can't walk for two weeks and my whole body hurts. It makes me want to stop and take a rest every couple of minutes! Now I'm going to take a class for Aerobic dance, I'm afraid, people like dance because it is funny and can make you happy but it can be so difficult because dancing for two hours straight can make you suffer.

Oh well, I just hope that this is another good journey...

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journey,,,,

For a long time I have always wanted to go on a journey.  To go to different places other than Beijing, and then go back.  There are different reasons for my desire to travel, such as wanting to see new places, work and studying.  I am a University student, but i have other hobbies.  I like physical activity, so I am also a student in a Fitness coach school. It's hard to learn everything at the University. It's so upsetting when I have no ideas in mind, and computer networking gives me a headache everyday.

 

At the another school, every day I have pains all over my body and have problems walking. Pilates from my belly gave me pain for another two weeks.  Spinning and Kickboxing made me want to stop to take rest every minute.  And now, I will take a class for Aerobic dance.  I am a little afraid.  People like dancing, but all the hard work in dance class is very demanding.  Training really makes people suffer because of the non stop dancing for two hours at a time.  I just hope that when I travel to get away, the journey will be great!

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It looks like you are having a lot of fun despite all the suffering from pushing your body so hard :)
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Love the photo.
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Good luck with your travels. Just a suggestion: Try to break up your writting into paragraphs instead of one big block of words. It makes it easier for people to read and also easier for people to make corrections.

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