The Notebook
I'm really exited ! It cut me to the heart ! I was watching The Notebook .
The Notebook is a romantic drama film . The story begins in 1940. It interleces with modernity , when the couple in love is in the hopital . They are very old , so the movie complete in with the death of two .
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The Notebook
I'm really excited! It cut me to the heart! I was recently watching The Notebook.
The Notebook is a romantic drama film . The story begins in 1940 and it interlaces with modernity when the couple is in love is in the hopital. They are very old , so the movie complete in with the death of two . (Arrange this sentence like this to make more sense: In the movie, the couple is very old, where in the end, the love story concludes in the death of the two. )
**Oh yes, and no spaces are needed before an punctuation mark.
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**is in love in the hopital
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