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enormous city!
When I walk through a huge city I can see the beauty of the trees beautiful trees along and between the streets. Men are shouting to each other in traffic jams, they don't mind the rules of traffic traffic laws, especially in during rush hour. They are so hurry in a hurry. There are many accidents in at the junctions and roundabouts, they even don't mind the speed cameras that are hidden. They are so in such a hurry to get to the places that they want. The bridges are full of cars. You can see a dead person on a pedestrian crossing, blood it getting out from his/her head. they are bleeding from their head. The most attractive things that you like see is are the trees and the plants beside the pavements.
Men is specifically for males, if you wanted to you could put "people" instead, becuase "people" is not gender specific.
:D Don't forget to capitalize.
enormous A big/huge city!
when i walk through a hugecity i can see the beauty of the trees along and between the streets.the Men are shouting to each other in traffic jams,they don't mind the rules of traffic traffic rules,especially in rush hours.they are so hurry hurried.there are many accidents in the junctions and roundabouts,they even don't mind the speed cameras that are hidden.they are so hurry to get to the places that they want to come to.the bridges are full of cars.you can see a dead person on a pedestrian crossing,the blood it getting out from his\her head.the most attractive thing that you like is the trees and the plants beside the pavements.
Long time no see, I hope i helped.
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