Chile my beautiful country

Hi everyone !!!
I would like to write about my country. Chile is very beautiful place you can find mountains, valley, beaches, dessert, lakes, forests and icebergs in the Antartica´s territory. Chile is a longer territory in the North the climate is dry and in the South is colder. moreover, during the seasons of the years winter is colder, autum is froggy, summer is warming and spring is hot .

Hi everyone!!! 
I would like to write about my country. Chile is a very beautiful place where you can find mountains, valleys, beaches, desert, lakes, forests, and icebergs in the Antartic territory. Chile is a long territory. In the North the climate is dry, and in the South it is colder. Moreover, during the seasons of the year, winter is cold, autumn is foggy, summer is hot, and spring is warm.

¡Excelente! Algunas cosas para notar:

1) Dessert es postre y desert es desierto.

2) Longer implica una comparación entre por lo menos dos elementos. Por eso es mejor usar long aquí. 

3) En cuanto a temperatura, hot señala más calor que warm. Entonces, se asocia el verano con hot y la primavera con warm.

Chile my beautiful country

Hi everyone !!!
I would like to write about my country. Chile is very beautiful place you can find mountains, valley, beaches, dessert, lakes, forests and icebergs in the Antartica´s territory. Chile is a longer territory in the North the climate is dry and in the South is colder. moreover, during the seasons of the years winter is colder, autum is froggy, summer is warming and spring is hot.

Hi everyone !!! 
I would like to write about my country. Chile is a very beautiful place where you can find mountains, valleys, beaches, desserts, lakes, forests and icebergs in the Antartic territory. Chile is a longer territory in the North, the climate is dry and in the South it is colder. Moreover, during the seasons of the year, winter is colder, autum is foggy, summer is warm and spring is hot.  

Muuuuuuy bien hecho!

Me parece que Chile es un lugar muy agradable. Me gustaría viajar allí algun día. 

Bendiciones!