Search from various English teachers...
China flagCandy
First notebook entry: Introducing myself hello ~! I'm from CHINA Rightnow I'm learning English to prepare my test of TOFEL. My English better than it was ,but still not very good. I really want to practice it such as :writing or speaking .Would u help me , please ? Also I know ,maybe it's a little difficult for me ,meanwhile I will try my best to learn it ! This time ,I want to introuuce myself: Because my chinese name means candy, and I call myself Candy . it's so sweet ,isn't it ? Last year I went to US for my winter vacation. LA 、NY、 San Francisco、and so on, In a word:I have been to the east and west.It's amazing ,all the palce have fresh air、 fresh wind 、 color of sky is naval 、 nice pepole、and the architecture style houses 、 really great. So after I traveled ,I sware I must go to Amercian university because I love this soil 、and believe in US I can learn many things that can not learn it in CHINA I konw in this diary,I made mistakes about grammar.

Corrections · 5

0

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hello ~!
I'm from CHINA
I'm learning English for preparing my TOEFL test right now. My English is better than before ,but still not very good. I really want to practice it such as :writing or speaking .Would u help me , please ?and  I know ,maybe it's a little difficult for me ,meanwhile I will try my best to learn it !


I want to introduce myself this time 
Because of my chinese name means candy, so I call myself Candy . it's so sweet ,isn't it ? Last year I went to US for my winter vacation. LA 、NY、 San Francisco、and so on, In a word:I have been to the east and west.It's amazing ,all the place have fresh air、 fresh wind 、 the color of the sky is naval 、
nice people、and the architecture style houses 、 really great. So after I traveled ,I swore I must go to a university in the USA, because I love this soil 、and believe in the US I can learn many things that can not learn in CHINA


I know in this diary,I made mistakes about grammar.
0

My suggestion:

hello ~!
I'm from CHINA
I'm learning English now to prepare for my TOFEL.  My English is better than before, but still not very good. I really want to practice writing or speaking . Would u help me, please? Also I know ,it will be a little difficult for me, but I will try my best to learn it !


Now, I want to introduce myself:
Because my chinese name means candy, I call myself Candy.  It's so sweet ,isn't it ? Last year I went to the US for my winter vacation. LA 、NY、 San Francisco、and so on, In a word:I have been to the east and west.It's amazing ,all the places have fresh air、 fresh wind 、 color of sky is navy 、
nice pepole、and the architecture  、  all really great. So after my travels ,I swore I must go to an Amercian university because I love this land 、and believe that in US I can learn many things that I cannot learn it in CHINA


I know I made grammer mistakes in this diary.
0
your english is pretty good enough for non native. keep it up!

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today