First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,everyone.I come from China,Shanghai.I was born in a beautiful town.I am keen on writing,designing,playing the piano and so on.I will come to America soon to study in High School.White is my favourite colour because it's pure.The most I appreciate person is Plato.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, everyone. I come from China, Shanghai. I was born in a beautiful town. I am keen on writing, designing, playing the piano and so on. I will come to America soon to study in High School. White is my favourite colour because it's pure. The person I admire is Plato.
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Thank you very much.I am glad to meet the first friend here.
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Good luck on your studies in the U.S.
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For the last sentence, I would write:
The person I admire most is Plato.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,_everyone._I come from China,_Shanghai._I was born in a beautiful town._I am keen on writing,_designing,_playing the piano and so on._I will come to America soon to study in High School._White is my favourite colour because it's pure._The I very much appreciate a person who is Plato.
Who is Plato? A Classical Greek philosopher?
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