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this is me hellow,everybody!my name is Brandon.lin,of crouse ,this is my english name,my Chinese name is 林帅东,huh, i think it is funny. i'm 16 years old ,i m living in Xi'an ,China.i m in high school right now.i really love english,i can speak it everytime(but my sister think it is very annoying.cause she hates English ,especially English test).i love eating steaks,italy noodles.wow!delicious! ha:) . i hope someone can help me with my English.also, ican help u with Chinese.!希望我们可以互帮互助,共同提高我们想要提高的语言。谢谢所有愿意帮助我的人。

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This Is Me

Hello, everybody! My name is Brandon Lin, of course, that is my English name. My Chinese name is 林帅东, huh, I think it is a funny name. I'm 16 years old and I'm living in Xi'an, China.

I'm in high school right now, I really love English, I can speak English quite fluently, but my sister think it is very annoying because she hates English, (especially English tests). 

I love steaks and Italy noodles. Wow! Delicious! ha:) I hope that someone can help me study English. In return, I can help you study Chinese!

希望我们可以互帮互助,共同提高我们想要提高的语言。谢谢所有愿意帮助我的人。

 

Hey there fella! 

First of all I agree, your name is awesome. *jealous*

All kidding aside, remember the capital letters at the beginning of every sentence, and also for languages and names and so on. There should also be a space AFTER the comma-, period-, or exclamation mark. 

Light blue means that you should consider leaving it out if you want to be more formal.

那,现在我要写一些中文的句子,但是我先要告诉你,我的中文不太好。

我很高兴有机会帮你的忙,如果有问题,请问我就我会帮你。

欢迎你来italki学习,为你学习上有成功!

// 瑞

 

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