First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi

I'm Daeseob Lim.
My English name is David.
Call me David.
I live in Barrington, but I'm Korean.
I want to make friend and learn English.
If you want to learn Korean , Contact me~

Bye~

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blue- corrections or changes

(I rephrased it a bit, to make it sound more natural ^^)

Hi

I'm Daeseob Lim, but you can call me David (my English name). I am from Korea, but currently live in Barrington, _______ (<- I don't know whether you live in Barrington, Illinois or Barrington, New Hampshire; I would say which to clarify. Because in america it is not uncommon for multiple towns in different states, to have the same name). I would like to make friends and learn English. Contact me if you want to learn Korean.

Bye

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi

I'm Daeseob Lim.
My English name is David.
Call me David.
I live in Barrington, but I'm Korean.
I want to make friends and learn English.
If you want to learn Korean , contact me~

Bye~

Hi David! Nice to meet you. 만나서 반가워요. If you'd like to practice English sometime, please contact me! 영어를 연습하고 싶으면 제게 연락하세요.